Romeo and Juliet: Act 5 Scene 3 Revised Version By Me =)

     Romeo and Juliet is one of Shakespeare's great stories and very famous when the time it was shown to public. Some of us wanted the ending of the story changed and we have our own ideas how to end this story but this ending of this story will be permanent and will not be changed anymore. Some of us wants to make the two lovers alive in the end to have this "Happy Ending" that we all know. Some of us may be wanted this classic one where the two lovers died together.

     If I will be given the chance to change this ending, I will do is that the two lovers, Romeo and Juliet, alive at the end of the story. When Romeo was in the act of drinking the potion, Juliet wakes up and Romeo was shocked with this. Paris tried to kill Romeo but Juliet stopped Paris from this and told Paris the truth between her and Romeo. The story will flow like this:

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Paris: what are you doing here boy?!
Romeo: I came here to see Juliet.
Paris: You can't go to her tomb unless you defeated me in a duel.
Romeo: Oh Paris I beg you not to do this. I only want to see   Juliet here.

[ They fought each other but Romeo won the duel and Paris has fainted]

Romeo: Oh my Juliet! Oh please don't leave me. I shall go with you if you will not stay beside me. You are my life Juliet. Please be with me or I will be with you in peace. [Romeo was about to drink the potion but Juliet rises]

Romeo: Oh my Juliet! Don't leave me anymore.I will be with you where ever you are and I will not... [Juliet kisses Romeo]

Juliet: Oh my Romeo! Don't talk anymore. I am here now. Oh Romeo, I do love you!

Romeo: I do love you to oh Juliet.

[Paris entered with his dagger]

Paris: Juliet is mine and no one could get her from me.[Paris is about to stab Romeo but Juliet block this and Paris was forced to stop]

Juliet: No please Paris. For the God's sake, stop this! I don't love you and Romeo is the only I loved. Please let us go in peace and stop this nonsense things! I do love Juliet!

[Paris continued to attack Romeo]

Paris: I won't allow this! Juliet is only mine!

[Romeo stabbed Paris with Paris' dagger and Paris died]

Romeo: I'm so sorry dear Paris. I don't want to do this but..[Paris holds Romeo]

Paris: It's okay, it's okay. I know Juliet is in the right hand.[Paris died]

[They were married to each other and the Montague and the Capulet family are now friends and are not mortal enemies anymore.]